This text consited of images and writting to create the feel of the story, something that is dark and unnerving, originally the text was much longer as i wanted to create more of a foreshaowing affect with the 'I did ask nicely' which I did manage to the actual event of the hitchhacker, to what happens after. I found that I struggled with the word count anyway as I enjoy writting more flowery and with lots of description, also I had many ideas which I wanted to include but couldn't so I feel it is little squeesed together. If i had more words it could of been better. Also I wanted to include more graphology to enhance the piece more, however I found that the images I did manage to create was very time consuming.
I did
ask nicely
1
Rain
and the orange streetlights
The
car driving through the night
A
mysterious man standing by the road with his thumb held up
The
characters sympathise with the man and pulled over to give him a lift
The
description of the hitchhiker
The
women driving keeps looking in the mirror to make sure her daughter is alright
A
truck crashes into the car causing it to flip and crash
The
women and daughter get out, they are reasonably alright
However
the man’s legs are amputated from the crash and he drags himself for the
wreckage
He
begs the women to help him as he couldn’t move properly
The
women is absolutely stunned by the situation and is paralysed
The
man ends up passing away in front of her
2
Time
has skipped and the women has sent the daughter out to buy some things for that
night
She
walks down a very quiet road and begins to hear weird scratching noises behind
her
She
looked behind her confused but saw nothing, even though there were long marks
across the concrete
She
increases her speed wearily
However
the sound also increases, gaining up on her
She
starts running and was tearing up in fear
Suddenly
she feels a hand grab her ankle and dig long nails into her skin
And
she lets out a blood-curdling scream
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